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Thanks again for your helpful review Traunt! I'm glad that I got the relatable aspect across. I think I was really into the "misunderstood teen" phase when I wrote it. ...

Alright ladies and gents! *arms up* I surrender! Hehe, I shan't critique poetry again and hearby swear to stick to what I know. :-/

Haha! Must be nifty to have a time machine! I'd want to tell my adolescent self to hang in there, it gets better. Even mum gets nicer over time ;-) ...

Thanks IamTraunt! Very detailed review and lots to work with. I will let you know when the next chapter is out

Hi Laure, Thanks for your review! I added the note below after you commented, so I doubt you saw it. Bottom line is that the mere passage of time has ...

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Once again, thank you for your review, James! I was aware of the random punctuation and decided to leave them there until someone advised me what I'm meant to do ...

Hi Wizard I'm glad my poem compelled you to stray into unknown territory! I didn't have the highest expectations for this piece; I don't claim to be an expert poet ...

Glad you found something to relate to, thunder! I knew I wasn't alone in feeling rejected... I especially wanted to portray how that one small act can spoil the rest ...

Thank you so much for the review and like, James! I think the problem was that when I published this piece, it failed to show up in the stream of ...

Thanks for your review Raven! The "o" in "oDig..." is a lost in translation between Microsoft Word and Internet - it's meant to be a bullet point! It's the same ...

I'm glad it helped you, Nisha! When you realise you want to give something more than a sweater every year, it starts you on an incredible journey to cherishing your ...

This is profoundly beautiful, well done :-)

Don't worry ED :-D I appreciate that you took the time and space to review it in depth. It's also the longest review I have ever gotten, so it seemed ...

Thanks for the review!