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  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Not-So-Real Reality

    Hi Euph, nice poem. And there's my Johnny Cash style review. Just kidding. First off, I disagree with Puss in Boots when he said that "the anger of the poem's ...

    Dec 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Horror, Fantasy Re: My House of Cards

    My jaw hit the floor when I read this, no offense but I didn't expect this from you! This is actually the first piece of writing I've read on this ...

    Sep 5, 2012
  • Other » Realistic, Dramatic Re: -DELETED-

    I like what you did here, the artistic statement is clearly expressed in the way that you formatted the title: "deleted" to stand out by using capitals and a dash. ...

    Jul 20, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Bliss

    This sort of reminds me of Lily Allen's song (I forget the name) about your life being considered over by others when you are only in your 20's. Not a ...

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: deleated

    Not a fan of that genre but the lyrics are well suited :) I kick myself in the ass when I compare what we consider "Troubles" and "Hardship" these days ...

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: .

    This poem actually made me sick. Respect is earned, it is not acquired through age. I am 16 and I have a loving 25 year old partner, I also have ...

    Oct 30, 2008


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