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Woaw, my friend! I really like your spelling here! I felt for the headline as I entered the page... and I were just as happy when I read your text! Keep on the good work! You can change emo kids into happy kids, bro!

I like what you did here, the artistic statement is clearly expressed in the way that you formatted the title: "deleted" to stand out by using capitals and a dash. Then the empty post really makes the mind wonder what was here before whatever you said was deleted.

This is easily the most original piece of work that I've seen on YWS to date, I wouldn't change anything about it to be honest. Your grammar and spelling are top notch too, keep it up and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Bogasaurus Hex.

Hey Bob, that's funny about the little pony thing. My friend (well, he's more of a facebook friend) is into the same thing. Anyway, just letting you know I'm an unkissed 15 year old myself. If you want to meet a girl, the best way is getting into activities and clubs and away from video games.

Hey there!

Wow, Bob, this is heartbreaking. Sounds like this should be in a blog or such? But anyway, it sounds like you need a good dose of courage and a good venting. The best way to approach a girl/get girls to talk to you, is have confidence in being yourself. Be you, be okay with it, and know that everyone else is okay with it. You'll face a lot of rejection, just like everyone anywhere, but that's a part of life, and once it happens, you'll realize it's not the end of the world. Also, you are 16! That's too young to feel like this. I can relate slightly, being a non-kissed 15 year old girl. Point is, do what makes you happy, be you, and try and find some confidence! Let me know how life goes!

~Epic

Hmmm,lollololol
It's funny ...
Listen,maybe you should write HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!