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Re: Dawn
Hi! This was a very nice poem! I really liked the descriptive words and how you described sound- it really made it feel that you were there! My favorite part ...
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: Escape
Hi! Deleted12 here for a quick review! This was an interesting poem! I liked the repetition where you wrote, ''And my eyes, my eyes'' Repetition is usually good, if not ...
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: A Poem On Life
Wow...this poem amazing...I'm not just saying that! This poem was truly amazing and I loved it! This is the kind of the poem that will not be forgotten when you ...
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: What To Do?
Hi! Deleted12 here for a quick review !I really liked this poem... The ending was a little odd though, I thought...:) (hehe I'm talkin' my writing is SUPER STRANGE!!! haha ...
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: True Beauties
Hi Deleted12 here for a quick review! ;)I liked this Haiku poem! When I tried to do them-they were kinda hard to do (for me) but this one is a ...
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: Secrets
Hi MindBlown! That was an awesome poem! And that's really true:''Makes you feel covered in slime'' What I really liked about this poem was all of the creative examples of ...
May 21, 2013