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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Dawn

    Hi! This was a very nice poem! I really liked the descriptive words and how you described sound- it really made it feel that you were there! My favorite part ...

    Jul 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Escape

    Hi! Deleted12 here for a quick review! This was an interesting poem! I liked the repetition where you wrote, ''And my eyes, my eyes'' Repetition is usually good, if not ...

    Jul 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Poem On Life

    Wow...this poem amazing...I'm not just saying that! This poem was truly amazing and I loved it! This is the kind of the poem that will not be forgotten when you ...

    Jul 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: What To Do?

    Hi! Deleted12 here for a quick review !I really liked this poem... The ending was a little odd though, I thought...:) (hehe I'm talkin' my writing is SUPER STRANGE!!! haha ...

    Jul 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: True Beauties

    Hi Deleted12 here for a quick review! ;)I liked this Haiku poem! When I tried to do them-they were kinda hard to do (for me) but this one is a ...

    Jul 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Secrets

    Hi MindBlown! That was an awesome poem! And that's really true:''Makes you feel covered in slime'' What I really liked about this poem was all of the creative examples of ...

    May 21, 2013


Most things happen for a reason. Though, usually, the forces that be are immature enough that the reason is comedy.
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