deirdredawne

Per my regular style, here comes the knit pick first then the general after First off, i'm not a big fan of first person narratives. i find them so...diary-esque. Mentioning ...

Well for one. I loved it. I love how much description you could use to fill it. I was thinking in my head that this much, nai this heavy kind ...

I liked it. I recently quit smoking, so the title immediately through me into the mood of reminiscing. The withdrawals are true enough, regardless of what it is you are ...

Good day, looks like your a newby . well hello, i was there (still am?) not long ago. I'll start with nitpicking. This would read a lot easier if you ...

I really enjoyed this! i was expecting some angsty poem leading up to some a-hole boyfriend with black eyeliner.... and then it was the internet connection. having had a rather ...

"I saw my Dad step off the car" dad would step out of. "As he carried the usual stack of file" files "And the maid turning the door open for ...

Well it's me again. and in usual style I will start with the nitpicking comments :P The first paragraph seems a bit mature. This is hard becuase its the first ...

I really enjoyed this. It is so hard to nitpick... or hell even pick, when i'm so into the story. The other reviews (especially Jherek as I find his to ...

This is very interesting indeed! I'm excited for more! A bit confused though, on who's story we are hearing. I got the idea with the prologue that we would be ...

Ah very bitter and vindictive. How I enjoy it! Some spelling errors: The slip of your tongue The turn of my world. The treachory undeniable The consequence unavoidable. I loved ...

I like this. Though i found myself concentrating too much on the rhyming. It seemed forced. Overall i liked the lines and the repition. "Which is which?" i found misplaced ...

I am going to go through it party by part. so don't get discouraged as I nit pick! "My heart beat a mile faster as I walked towards the front ...

Interesting, is pretty much all that can be said. Without going into too much detail we already see atleast what is going on with Mary, her history, imagination takes over ...

It's hard to critique soemthing when your so enveloped by it. You transformed my current world into that which you created. I could easily picture the boy, the mother. You ...

And a good afternoon to you. I liked the beginning. It was quite nefarious and at first I thought that oo this could lead to more then what I thought. ...