defendthelegend

Hello After reading it I find it very good, and I only have one nit picky thing. Contradiction I knew I would live. It was a miracle that I was ...

hello That was very good. I can see where you are going with it. I think you have created a perfect plot, because all girls know what it's like to ...

I like the fact that you chose to write about harry potter about all that has come out. Especially as you are concentrating on his deep dark enemy. Although, prehapse ...

Hello. I like the idea, of the steriotypical Pirncess, is not so in this makes it more fantasising, and makes you want to read on, considering there are more cliff ...

Hello. I absolutly 1oo% agree. I get called loads of things and I am not. How can I make it clear it'sjust me. Then there are loads of people around ...

Hello. That is so good. It was really thought through, although I knew what was comming next, I was glad, because if it hadn't gone the way it did then ...

I am really suprised. I am not usually a rhymer or a rhymer reader. But I enjoyed this one, because I had meaning yet the rhyming worked, rather than making ...

Hello, You have hadmany reviews, and If I say the same things then I am sorry, but it takes long enough to read these + the long reviews :lol: okay. ...

Hello, I think that it is a very good poem, but prehapse the lines are a little uneven, maybe altering the stanzas a little to help this problem. It is ...

Hello I am also a musician First of all I love the way you set out each stanza, very well done. I like the fact that you explain in the ...

This is ery interesting way of looking at things. I mean, every doesn this thing when their little like, oh and he woke up and it was all a dream. ...

Hey, I think it is very good, but just a few things. The names Ali, and Ally are too similar, they make it too confusing, esspecially as we are new ...

I thank you so much. I ahve just read another poem on young writers society called to Lily, and it's so sad, so reading a happy poem has lighntended my ...

I think it is a very interesting poem. But there are a few questions I don't understand 1. Where is this room? 2. Are you scared of this room? 3. ...

Hello. :lol: That was a very intriguing poem. Full of truth, yet told well. What I liked was the relaxation at the beginning, making you feel normal, safe and happy. ...