deetea

It's just the fact that I'm horrible with my grammar when it comes to poems. I don't know where to break the lines, and if to use commas, periods, etc. ...

Thank you for your review! The whole situation with the punctuation is I'm not very good with my grammar when it comes to poetry but in general, I'm good with ...

Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed. I honestly was just very thoughtful on my word choice.

The way you write is very good. It feels as if I was in the passenger seat wile all this was happening. The imagery is great! I feel like if ...

I really enjoyed your poem. I feel like you painted a story out for me, and my mind just kind of raced to so many assumptions about where and when ...

I really like your poem. It's great that you speak up about what you believe. Your writing is good, I can't see the average people around me coming up with ...