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deetea

  • Other » Literature, Realistic Re: Terrified

    I think this is your first entry, and let me tell you, it's good. There is a few errors in your grammar, but that can easily be fixed. The emotion ...

    Feb 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: See What I've Become

    This great. As I began to read this I felt like I could every emotion put into this peace. I've never heard the song before, but I don't think I ...

    Feb 13, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Black and white photo

    This was amazing. So many different images popped into my mind as I read, even some memories. There are so many different ways death is seen, and this was just ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: 1

    This was so adorable! It warmed my heart, happy ending for once! A vast majority of the poems here are dark, and I'm definitely glad that I found some light! ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Synesthesia

    I adore this. You should embrace having synesthesia, if it can paint these images in your mind. I like how descriptive you are. When the topic is something so complex ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: blank canvas

    Short poems drive me nuts because I have a big imagination, but I guess that is the point. I do like the poem though, do not get me wrong. I ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our love was black and white

    I'm only new on here, but so far this is my favorite poem I've seen on here. It's heart warming, inviting, and I wish it was longer! Being a musician ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: den

    I like the direction this poem is heading. Yet, I do feel that there is supposed to be more, and maybe you should have put more imagery or detail. I ...

    Jun 23, 2014


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