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Re: Terrified
I think this is your first entry, and let me tell you, it's good. There is a few errors in your grammar, but that can easily be fixed. The emotion ...
Feb 13, 2015 -
Re: See What I've Become
This great. As I began to read this I felt like I could every emotion put into this peace. I've never heard the song before, but I don't think I ...
Feb 13, 2015 -
Re: Black and white photo
This was amazing. So many different images popped into my mind as I read, even some memories. There are so many different ways death is seen, and this was just ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: 1
This was so adorable! It warmed my heart, happy ending for once! A vast majority of the poems here are dark, and I'm definitely glad that I found some light! ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Synesthesia
I adore this. You should embrace having synesthesia, if it can paint these images in your mind. I like how descriptive you are. When the topic is something so complex ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: blank canvas
Short poems drive me nuts because I have a big imagination, but I guess that is the point. I do like the poem though, do not get me wrong. I ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Our love was black and white
I'm only new on here, but so far this is my favorite poem I've seen on here. It's heart warming, inviting, and I wish it was longer! Being a musician ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: den
I like the direction this poem is heading. Yet, I do feel that there is supposed to be more, and maybe you should have put more imagery or detail. I ...
Jun 23, 2014
