dbrick

This was superb. I really enjoyed it (as much as you can enjoy a sad poem). The rhyming flowed really well and seemed to be consistent. Your imagery really brought ...

This was an encouraging short story on perseverance. It reminded me of the many times I have fallen and gotten up. My only problem with the poem was that it ...

I really liked this poem! It contrasts the general view of love and the truer view of love. The wording, structure, etc. is good, I didn't see any problems. You ...

I find this poem very thought stimulating despite it's shortness (not saying that it's short length is bad). I had to read it several times and really think on it ...

I liked this poem, it has some really strong language that puts that image in my head. I like that you varied the pace of the poem, particularly near the ...