davidgma

This is my first review in awhile so forgive me if I'm rusty This is wonderful. The wording and imagery is absolutely exquisite, and you have such a well defined ...

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First off the idea is decent. It was little sappy for my taste but that is ok. But this poem seems to lack a few things. It does not have ...

Its a good concept except for a few things. The idea of rich over poor or wealthy over the laborclass has really been overplayed in the sense that the underclass ...

Your sense of self in this piece is marvelous. You really capture the life behind this story with some truley breathtaking imagery. True though it may be that you seem ...

This reads really well overall, and I would like to say that the overall tone of it is wonderful as well. The only things that i could find that might ...