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Re: Dark Turning Chapter One : Children
Yep next chapter!
May 25, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Okay This used to be Rain fall now its Dark turner .
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Face the wind
Hope that`s better
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 2
Yea! You wrote more ! I really love this you have a few errors like hear needs to be here. But besides that I love it !
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Face the wind
This is for the contest A word is worth a thousand pictures my word was head. The first word that popped in to my head was wind . I don`t ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Silent tears
I edited my poem now that I finally got around to it.
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Always stick together Chapter 1
I don`t agree with Fictionfanatic. I really like this, and I am waiting for you to write some more if your going to. Keep writing ~dasiamari
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Saved by him
I like this alot, but it kind of starts in the middle of nowhere. It needs paragraphs too. But besides those I really like this ~mari
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Love in the rain
How awesome Dasia! When I come back down the hill, if you'd like, I will help you correct any grammar and/or punctuation mistakes that may have been made. It always ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Fly
This is by me she posted it because my computer crashed .
May 17, 2011 -
Re: deleted
it the end of Love In The Rain my novel Thanks for loving it :)
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Dream
I edited my song. :)
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: What I once knew
I loved this. It kind of reminded me of Twilight:). On another note I love your name My birth stone=sapphire My fav. day= Wednesday
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Mr. Drive-Me-Crazy
I loved this so much! Yes ellipsis means "Dot Dot Dot"( I`ve never heard of it either:) ) Thank you for joining and then writing this!
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Wondrous Mother Earth
I`m a total nature freak so I LOVED this thank you for writing!
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