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Was it really? Oh gosh *Face palm*

No prob! Thanks Though it is Devils Fire. I don't want a possessive its just the name, if you understand what I mean :P Sorry I'm a bit confusing!

If I put an apostrophy in Devils Fire it would become Devil's (Devil is) Maybe you mean Devils'?

Also yours is better than mine

I believe she meant my song, they are rather similar. Though I couldn't have copied you mine being posted first. I think that this whole ting could be dropped, no?

I really like this! "For it’ll land me in hot water I don’t consider you a human anymore I’m surprised you’re considered a daughter" These are my favorite lines!

I LOVE this Spark! This is awesome!! "My guitar will sing your story, as long as I keep strumming" This is my favorite line through the whole thing. "The ending ...

Wow since Nate stopped the points program.I never get replies

HI! Here to review Birdy! 1) Steeling should be stealing 2) If this is Alcatraz why is there a truck?? Maybe a boat? 3) Alcatraz has no gate that I'm ...

it says I couldn't get it. But good job nice poem. Like Amazing Grace.

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its good but to much like similar stories that are making a rise to fame at the moment ( Example: Forest of Hands and Teeth and the Hunger Games Trilogy) ...

Thankyou Caily, and yes your right Nightgoddess its a song, not a poem.

I'm not a big fan a hell-boy but I really liked this! I'm also not the best at review so I will let somebody else cover that! But well done!