dahlia58

Thank you for your insightful commentary. I do write some of the characters' thoughts in italics, as you suggested. And rather than a light novel, this story is specifically tailored ...

YWS tends to post reviews twice....

What a beautiful world your world is.^^ I like the strong nature-related imagery you've used throughout the work. I especially like the second-to-last stanza, where you compare the coming and ...

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This is a really good poem. The "blood-spattered graffiti" and the "story of a people failed" lines really bring out the poor state of the "rebels." Indeed, blood stained artwork ...

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Darkness within the speaker in this poem is being strangled by her own dreams and her unwillingness to see them through? That is a common problem among people nowadays (nods). ...

Thank you very much^^ The blood types were actually kinda random, but since a lot of anime series add them to profiles...

A powerful description of Hell.

The poor grandmother must be a nervous wreck by now...

Thank you for your comment^^ Many anime series include blood types for character profiles, so that's why I added them. Also, chapters 1 and 2 are up already. The setting ...

It's a novel. I've already posted Ch. 1 and 2, but since there are 12 protagonists, I decided to post a basic profile page.

Thank you very much again. This isn't really meant to be a poem. It's supposed to show some of Ruri's thoughts (her mother's abusive).

The composer said I can use my translation in "Sleepless." Someone's going to sing it at some point. Thanks for your comment^^

There are 12 protagonists. It's impossible to describe each one in depth during the story, so I'm going to add a basic profile page, with their ages, appearances, etc. Thank ...

Is there a theme behind this work?

An allegory of guilt and forgiveness...This is an amazing story. The only thing I want to point out are the second and third sentences. I don't think Athoria needs to ...