Hey, WinnyWriter here to leave a review. This is a unique thought you're using. Clearly the narrator must be experiencing dreadful agony. The way it's written, I get the idea that there is more than just physical pain going on. The part where it brings the word "sane" into the picture definitely shows that there is some mental/emotional pain as well. Great job showing the great desperation of the narrator. You're a talented writer, so keep up the good work.
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