dahlia58

This is a powerful work^^ Please do write more.

Thank you very much^^

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I love the world's natural beauty and mystery described in this poem. The minute humanity thinks there's nothing more to discover about the earth, another phenomenon occurs. And then we're ...

I love the world's natural beauty and mystery described in this poem. The minute humanity thinks there's nothing more to discover about the earth, another phenomenon occurs. And then we're ...

All fixed. Thank you^^

What an action packed 1st chapter

Not a problem. I'm not fussy about quoting, please don't worry^^ Nishi shinjuku is dark and gloomy at night, in my opinion...(It's the business district of Tokyo after all). And ...

I apologize...Your comment was cut off near the end. Could you tell me what you were saying there?

Thank you for your insightful commentary. This dialogue-heavy style is used in light novels, the genre I write. Also, Mamoru is male. The setting is also not the main focus ...

Yes, but adopted children are just as much as the creation of their parents as biological children. This is just my opinion, however. I enjoyed reading this poem very much.

Just to clarify, all of the names mentioned so far are Japanese (I'm Korean, however).

This is a great poem on friendship, whether it stays or leaves. It helped me rethink some of my own relationships with others. Indeed, even if a friend leaves, their ...