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Is the passage starting with "I hope my fellow followers" meant to be italicized? Other than that, I found no major problems with this chapter. I really felt bad for ...

This was funny. I laughed a lot while reading this~ I'm fond of Mark Twain's works (satire king), but even I have to admit, sometimes it feels like writers use ...

I love Disney's fairies, so this caught my eye. The whole story was simply adorable. Preparing for someone's wedding, let alone a "royal wedding" is crazy...(personal experience helping out with ...

I could really feel Julia's excitement in this chapter. It'd be great if she passed the science test. From what I can tell so far, Julia seems to be an ...

I had fun reading this! And I'm picky about what I read for entertainment, so if I say a story's fun and interesting, it usually is. The only mistakes I ...

I'm interested in Eastern European topics, so this essay caught my eye. Your writing is very easy to understand, which is rare for technical works. I usually hate reading essays, ...

All of your characters sound great, if you ask me. The physical descriptions you put in really helped me visualize them in my head. I'm not good at making characters ...

I've already said this for the first chapter, and I thought the same about the second chapter, but your writing is good. Really good. I rarely see this kind of ...

This was great. I mean it. In fact, this feels like something that might appear in a textbook, if it were a bit longer (school stuff is always long...). The ...

Fantasy castles...Real castles...Not the same thing. This essay was actually easy to read, which is amazing. I hate reading essays normally, because I can't understand a single thing. But your ...

Are the animals Thomas' imaginary friends? Please correct me if I'm wrong...This is a fun short story! I really loved the theme of leaving important things behind to move forward ...

I did NOT expect Lottie to die already. And poor Hannah's been framed...I'm starting to like Amethyst, though. She seems so cool! As for mistakes, in the paragraph starting with ...

Please correct me if I'm wrong...But is this story influenced by anime to a certain degree? The way the characters speak, and the fox girl...Sorry, I might be thinking too ...

I'm not a great reviewer, but I'll try my best. Honestly, though, I don't think there's nothing much to edit here. Your writing is clear and easy to understand. I ...

I've never reviewed an essay before, but I'll do my best. First off, you're a senior movie critic? That's impressive. And this movie review essay really made me interested in ...