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Re: Well, I'm back
i think this is a very good poem but the only problem i have with it is that the topic should have been explored more but other then that good ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: Force of Heaven, Force of Earth
i think its good but the only problem i have is that it seems a bit choppy, but that was probably what you were goin for
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: Masks
all i have to say on this matter is that this poem is really good keep it up!
Jul 1, 2010 -
Re: Different world
okay thank you ill keep that in mind
Feb 18, 2010