Different world

okay thank you ill keep that in mind

Hi Cyn, here as promised.

First things first, dividing this into stanza would really help rather then writing in a prose format. First of all easier to read, secondly more appealing to the eye. I'll do it for you just so you get the idea for how to divide it up (as well as point out any mistakes or problems):

Don't you ever wish for a different world?
One, that is different from the one you know?
One where things are of a different circumstance than what you know?
Where things are different, in some ways better,(space)or more manageable?
Where relationship(no apostrophe)s with people are better, or where the sting of humanity is non-existent?

Where the ache of cruelness is covered by the light of kindness and the warmth of love? One where caring for people is as second hand as adoring nature(apostrophe)s simplicity?
Where the world isn't demolished by the greedy hand of money?
Where people don't see black, white, or brown as different colors but as the same color just different shades?

Where hate does not exist, just misunderstandment(not a word)?
A world where the (lion) can lay down with the lamb without fear of being judged?
One where money, race, or social standing doesn't matter just the feelings toward each other do? One where violence and war do not exist?

A world like that is not known to people yet, but hopefully in time things will change for the better,(space) and only then will the difference between heaven and earth not be so substantial,(space)and the difference between hell and earth a greater gap.