curiousvampire

okay, this was scary amazing stuff! I enjoyed, but I suggest you reread again, because I did spot a few minor mistakes that stuck out and slapped me in the ...

I rarely ever come into this forum, but the title sparked my interest and the first sentence sent me into a trance to keep on reading. It was really good ...

That was evil :evil: But I can't stay mad at you :lol:

Ha,ha! I loved this, its really fun and down-to-earth. Some off my friends write stories like these, so I'm used to critiquing these type of books. It was unexpected and ...

I like the beginning, it was started with action and ended with more supense. You had me at the edge of me seat and your setenes flowed nicely together. Your ...

I see potential in your composition, but I also see mistakes and I advise you to listen an incorporate what Fading-dreams suggested. I have to say I liked it and ...

I have to agree with Shubhi, I've never seen such unique characters.They were brilliant and vibrant. I liked the voice you portrated in the narrator, the datail of events was ...

Okay I've read the prologue which was solid beginning, leaving me wanting more. This chapter was a great foundation, supporting the prologue. The structure and descriptions were carefully planned out ...

Hey fix, I'm your reviewer for this night. Your story was clean and edgy; no grammatical or spelling error to be seen. It was odd and humorous, especially when she's ...

Horray! Spledid work, it was really cute and dynamic. Plus it was real.I liked this chapter its so simple and creative. I enjoy how you described how unnatral Andrew felt ...

Good, but it was a little too fast and characters had little emotion. I felt nothing really; no excitement or happiness of any kind, it was pretty drawl.Boneless without any ...

Hi,my name is CuriousVampire and I shall be your reviwer for today. First the nitpicks that needs fixing, but their really wasn't any: "Your hair," said his mother, touching his ...

Okay so far ,but it you need to write a more.....please. The only thing that I had problem I had was very minor,yet noticeable: Even thought the man said he ...

'The Canvas Room,' is haunting yet beautiful and humorous. Creative and lush imaginative writing. As you can see I really thought this piece was serpentine,it sent chills up my spine ...

Hi, the name is Curious and I stumbled onto your story and soon fell in love with it.'The Elemental Lands', was spellbinding from the beginning to end. Darkly brilliant, disturbing ...