curiousvampire

Very sad indeed, sweet twisted and somber every aspect of your story was good, but like Nike pointed out I'm also confused about the whole two months thing. But by ...

Welcome Darthkay to YWS hope your getting along okay. For your first post your composition was good, the imagery was subtle and descriptions creative, your usage of words was powerful. ...

Hey Nepo, lets get straight to the point shall we you have some grammatical errors that Kaedee pointed out so I suggest you fix them please and thank you. This ...

First off your avatar is awesome, second I loved it and third think it's definitely destined for another chapter. Sad really that he thought it was joke before and now ...

Looks like I'm here first :). Welcome fellow writer to YWS hope your getting along alright. Now on to the story, it was very interesting and sort of a cliche ...

Very dynamic writing I must say, your execution and style of your story was very well thought out. It was something new and interesting. Also your descriptions were precise and ...

WOW! I'm head over heels with this. Your story was splendid and I enjoyed, the descriptions were great and the ending very unexpected. I agree with Navita to transition the ...

Nitpicks are in bold. I woke up, tired. I couldn't remember what I was doing done yesterday. I went to have breakfast and I saw my mom, in love . ...

This gets more enticing with every part and chapter I read. Hey shubi, I'm here to review as always. Every mistake plausible looks like they have already been taken care ...

Wicked scary! This was great, edgy, eerie and terrifyingly beautiful in other words I thought it was brilliant. You captured the movie mood and characters perfectly in this piece and ...

Hey Kadee, your neighborhood vampire is here to review! Like Nike said for your first romance piece. The only thing I wished that you seriously did was to add more ...

Hey Crescent, WOW first off this was really sad and sweet , I liked it a lot and was very unexpected. It was something new. Anyways as love stories goes, ...

Well done, except for a few mistakes this was belivable and sadly abit on the corny side, but that's okay sometimes corny is good and this my fellow writer was ...

Ha ha, she lost her top............can you say embarrassing moment? Okay this chapter had me going, seriously. It was good and humorous in every sense, I liked it. There was ...

Long Time no see, Stori! On to your piece, this was good,but sadly in my eye's not great. First off to me it could have been a wee bit longer ...