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Thank you both. It's good to know that I could improve this to make it a better peice. To retrodisco666: It's okay, I can take critisicm.

Thank you all three of you for the amazing reviews. I've taken in all the advice and have considered this story strongly to become a short story or novel. Congrats ...

Thank you three for your nice and helpful comments. I greatly appreciate them and hope that of the same will come my way.

This is really deep and emotional(of course). So I just wanted to say that this is very interesting and well worth the time to read it. Have a nice day ...

Hey man, I remember seeing you write this and I just wanted to tell you that I am very glad that you have recieved such great reception. I hope more ...

Hello,and I hope you've had a nice day and/or evening. This is a really good person for someone your age. Your grammar and vocabulary is truly amazing, and the fact ...