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the poem felt really peaceful somehow. despite the sense of grandness & adventure that the mythical aspect lent this i ended up getting 'quiet' vibes from it; i think the ...

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hiya :] just wanted to say i really like the rhyming in your poem and the flow of how you developed your idea of laughter. your opening and closing lines ...

thanks for the review! good to know the twin cinema worked out :3

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thanks for the review! i'm glad the twin cinema ended up making sense :

thank you for sharing your thoughts :3

thanks for the review! the 'salon treatment' line was supposed to explain that the persona was getting their hair washed and also give them a sort of sarcastic & ungrateful ...

ah, the water imagery arises since the persona's mother is helping them to wash their hair after they broke their arm. thanks for the review!

mhmm those are some themes i was aiming for! thanks for the review :]

heyo! welcome to yws :3 thank you for the review, i don't quite understand what you're trying to say, but i appreciate the comment :]

that's very flattering, thank you :]

aha thank you for the welcome! everyone here is so nice :3 anyway yep that's exactly what i was trying to convey, i appreciate the feedback %u0AEE %u02F6%u1D54 %u1D55 %u1D54%u02F6 ...

cool! :o

thank you for the kind words! about the categorisation of the poem, i think it's more fitting as a poem than a short story. it's a lot more condensed and ...