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Thanks to Snoink I was able to fix the double spacing problem

Thanks to Snoink I was able to fix the double spacing thing

Thanks to Snoink I was able to fix the double spacing thing

Thanks to Snoink I was able to fix the double spacing thing.

wow you really think you know your stuff...lol. What words were mispelled? I don't think there are too many mispelled words. I"m not sure why you said that. And as ...

Lame and outdated you wannabe

It's already in the lyric section. Anyway, I kind of liked this even though I could not relate to anything in it

So the whole message of the song is that you like "fridays" I understood that Keep trying

This is overly stupid and pathetic

Dude, you need to sing louder. It's hard to hear you on youtube. As for the lyric itself, I think it was much better than the "Pillow" one, although it ...

I didn't really care much for it. Also, I could barely understand what you were saying on the youtube video.

I'm a bit surprised that this was supposedly written by an 18 year old when the whole lyric comes off being so juvenile and lame. I'm sorry for being so ...

This is the chorus and it stays the same: Oh Life makes me feel as high as the stars Then life brings me down like a meteor Yes, life makes ...

I will agree with whoever said this...."lyric poetry indeed. I like it, many have been through that dreaded stage when we feel rejected for the wrong we did. It is ...

Interesting topic. I liked the lyric and I really couldn't see anything to correct. Keep up the good work.