crescent

This is pretty good. I was enticed by the prologue bit and continued my journey into Far Away as I read about the MC's crazy eye powers. You have unique ...

xP This poem made my day/night. I was reading it at first and wondering what magical book it was you were referring to with all these characters then about half ...

Your poem is whiny. Many poems are whiny. I don't mean to be rude, but I somewhat agree with the above reviews but yet at the same time I feel ...

The metal knobs on the church doors glisten menacingly under the intense sunlight and seem to be testing me of my determination. I think it would sound better if you ...

First off, I'd just like to say I don't get why people would say anything about him "looking like a lesbian". I'm not really good at analyzing poetry, but I ...

Jasminebells pretty much mentioned everything that I might have said. The first thing I also thought of when I saw your post was twilight. I was also quite confused at ...

You have a nice story line here. It was a pleasure reading your monologue. However, there were a lot of grammar distractions. I say this in the kindest way possible. ...

Hi Tenyo. I read the last couple of chapters a few days ago and they're pretty awesome. ^_^ You probably already know that I like Lost and Found. I liked ...

This is good. The title drew me in and the poem was amazing. Everyone else already pretty much covered all the grammar stuff. I don't really grasp the meaning of ...

Hi Tenyo. :) I just love Lost & Found. I don't know what it is about it,from the style of writing you use to the actual content itself. Allow me ...

Hi there. I liked how you described liars. It was an interesting poem to read. I agree with Ray though. You talk about "they" in your poem so you may ...

Loving it, Tenyo. :) Tiny whispers drifted across the classroom and she knew they where all about her. Comma after "classroom" and "where" should be "were". She was given a ...

I cancelled all my social plans over Christmas in order to look after Henri, and made up an excuse about spending time with distant relatives (which wasn’t completely untrue. That ...

Hello. I like the chracters names. They're unique but not too exotic. The idea sounds interesting. I'd love to see a full chapter. Like etinarcadiaego said, I'm sensing a vampire ...

Hi. Crescent was here. I would review, but you said ((Thanks for the review guys! If you've got anything to mention that nobody else has, feel free. This is the ...