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Hi Olli. This was a nice piece. *likes* I was eleven when I was murdered. Murdered by a six year old girl who smiled brightly when I first met her. ...

Hi. I really liked this piece. It's so true!!! I made a few formatting changes. L ove is like medicine , (it) makes you feel better or worse . I ...

Hi Howler. I like the message in this poem. People definitely shouldn't care what others think and be themselves. My words couldn't be less relevent to them, so they think ...

Hi. This was an interesting subject. It's very unique. This poem confused me a little though. I've played chess before, but I couldn't really figure out who "I" is. I ...

Hi. I hope everything's getting better. I just tweaked the formatting a little. It's the message and feeling that counts and you portrayed the feeling well. What happened ? I ...

Hi Emily. Okay, I just changed the formatting a bit. This was so sad... This is sorta like how I feel now... The wind blows the frail branches a gainst ...

Hi hero. Not to be mean or anything but I sort of agree with Elinor... It didn't really seem personal. It was just stating what spiderman does like what Elinor ...

D: You cut parts out... I read it before you cut stuff out and it didn't give me a headache... I kind of like the old version a little better... ...

Hi!!! Welcome to YWS. I hope you like it here. Most of us don't bite. :smt002 I shall review for you today. :D :smt001 :smt003 How do you sleep at ...

Hi nightlight. This one's even more scary than the other one... Now I'm scared... sort of... It's dark outside right now... I'm going to peek at the other ones tomorrow ...

Hi Forest :smt003 . I shall review today. Blood flows freely from my nose and I can't breathe. I can only breathe in the stench of my only red blood. ...

Aww... that's how I feel too but it's different... It's really emotional (your poem). I think you got the formatting right, but I wouldn't know... Lol. I liked it :) ...

GAWH!!!! GoldenQuill got here before me :( I wanted to point at things :smt003 There may be repeats ;) It was good writing but it would be even better if ...

Hi Classy!!! :smt003 I shall be your first reviewer for TimeKeeper. When I first saw the title I thought it'd be something sci-fi with time traveling and stuff. You nearly ...

I like your lyrics/poem. Just remember to capitalize your "I"'s when you write. I almost cried after I read this poem. Though I've never been in a relationship before, this ...