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  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Why do I have to love you? (Denise’s song back to Gabriel)

    I%u2019m only writing the songs! I don%u2019t plan an actually making a tune or music out of them. Thanks for the review! :)

    Sep 14, 2022
  • Other » Fantasy, Other Re: Ghost house

    Thanks. This is the first story. This is the beginning.

    Sep 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The adventures of Poppy McLain-One

    Thank you for your review. I will edit this. (I have the sequel out now. I%u2019m going to make more stories. There will be ten in total).

    Sep 10, 2022
  • Other » Fantasy, Other Re: Cassandra is tired of being bullied

    Thank you! I edited it to look better. Read %u201CThe story of Phantom Yandere%u201D to understand. I wanted to make Cassandra (the character) have a reason for being evil. A ...

    Sep 10, 2022
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Horror Re: The happy, carefree, stupid clown song!

    I deleted the verse after the one about lying.

    Sep 8, 2022
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Horror Re: The happy, carefree, stupid clown song!

    It honestly depends. When I wrote this, the clown was the one being toxic. But maybe that%u2019s not how you see it.

    Sep 8, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: I don’t like the circus, is there a problem? (Samuel’s song)

    Thank you for your review! I just edited it. :)

    Sep 6, 2022
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Hannah’s doll

    Thank you for your review. ^v^ I%u2019ll edit it a bit.

    Sep 3, 2022
  • Other » Fantasy, Other Re: Ghost house

    Thank you for your review! The clown was just his Dad in a scary Halloween costume. I%u2019ve got more Halloween stories coming up in the future. :>

    Sep 2, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Why do I have to love you? (Denise’s song back to Gabriel)

    I deleted the A/N after your review. You gave off some good points. At the time I wrote this I thought it fit but now I%u2019ve changed my mind. Thanks ...

    Sep 2, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Lydia’s story

    I edited the story a bit to make more sense.

    Aug 28, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Lydia’s story

    I didn%u2019t draw her myself.I used a character making app called %u201CGacha Club%u201D to help.I adjusted the size of the eyes and hair and picked the colors for skin/clothes/eyes etc.I ...

    Aug 28, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Lydia’s story

    Thanks for your review! I have a list of the stories in order to help: 1.It%u2019s all a bit tragic isn%u2019t it? 2.Maisie and Mallory%u2019s demise 3.Lydia%u2019s story 4.Michael%u2019s story ...

    Aug 28, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: hot cicada summer

    No, not really any critiques.

    Aug 28, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: May’s story

    The series in order: 1.It%u2019s all a bit tragic isn%u2019t it? 2.Maisie and Mallory%u2019s demise 3.How curious.. 4.Michael%u2019s story 5.Lydia%u2019s story 6.Heather and Loraine have splendid fun!

    Aug 27, 2022


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