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Re: Who cares? (Gabriel’s loneliness)
Okay.
Sep 30, 2022 -
Re: Who cares? (Gabriel’s loneliness)
Thanks for your review. So about the line %u201CEven if I doubt and pray%u201D , would it sound better if I deleted the word %u201Cdoubt%u201D or %u201Cpray%u201D?
Sep 30, 2022 -
Re: Hypoxia
Okay, thanks!
Sep 27, 2022 -
Re: The Stupendous and Amazing Laughing Jack Song!
Thankksss%u2026 (The story you are thinking of is called %u201CPoor Amy%u201D. It%u2019s on my profile). I think that you should Google his origin story and this one story with a ...
Sep 24, 2022 -
Re: Poor Amy..
Thanks! I bolded the dialogue to make his voice sound deeper.
Sep 24, 2022 -
Re: Narcissus
Of course!
Sep 23, 2022 -
Re: Burning the Tear Flower
You%u2019re welcome! :)
Sep 22, 2022 -
Re: The Father:Part Two
Their story was spread around like an urban legend. That%u2019s how he knew about Natalie and Anika.
Sep 22, 2022 -
Re: The Bakery
Ooooh creepy! Great job. :)
Sep 22, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Two, Part One
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Sep 20, 2022
Oh goodness…She’s sending Kim far, far away, to the house of crazies! Maybe her Dad is one of them. Maybe he (whoever he may be) is a necromancer and she’s ... -
Re: Rosalie’s story-The babysitter of Loraine
Thanks for the tidbits!
Sep 20, 2022 -
Re: a wild woman, a burning stake
You%u2019re welcome!
Sep 19, 2022 -
Re: The adventures of Poppy McLain-Three
Thank you. :) (Poppy is a siren). I have the other two stories on my profile if you want to check them out.
Sep 18, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | 13 2/2 and 14
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Sep 15, 2022
Goodness! I thought that Luke was turning to the dark side for a moment. The I just said sounds like I’m talking about Star Wars if taken out of context. ... -
Re: Fairy Diary | 13 2/2 and 14
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Sep 15, 2022
Goodness! I thought that Luke was turning to the dark side for a moment. The I just said sounds like I’m talking about Star Wars if taken out of context. ...