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Re: Neverending Tempest - Part 3
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the jinxed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Enzo encounters Terra (who now goes by Nova), ...
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Re: Neverending Tempest - Part 2
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the spooky S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Enzo has a flashback of his childhood, he ...
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Re: Neverending Tempest - Part 1
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the macabre S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Enzo is a yakuza so that he can ...
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Re: Innocent Cog - Act 1: Playfighting
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the morbid S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Magnum Aubrey wants to become a cog, but ...
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Re: Expedition Prologue
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Captain Irene Shield is floating throughout space after ...
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Re: Writing from a Desk in the Dark: Chapter 11
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mortifying S’more? Top Graham Cracker - The narrator is concerned about Demeter because something ...
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Re: The Dress
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the atrocious S’more? Top Graham Cracker - This is a poem about a dress, a ...
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Re: As Above so Below and Somewhere in Between
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the horrifying S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Barbiel goes down to Earth to bless the ...
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Re: All Because of a Glass of Milk CH-3
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the morbid S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Destiny interrogates Mrs. Williams and learns that she ...
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Re: All Because of a Glass of Milk CH-1 and 2 merged
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the scary S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Destiny Rose, Carmen, and Theo work together in ...
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Re: Raven
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - This is the poem “The Raven”, but in ...
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Re: The Fall of the World
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the morbid S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Riven takes Mei to Earth. They fight monstrous ...
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Re: Writing from a Desk in the Dark-Chapter 10
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the macabre S’more? Top Graham Cracker - The narrator goes to a campus dance with ...
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Re: Bad bloodlines: The culling house (wip title, name suggestions appreciated)
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - In the Culling House, unwanted children of celebrities ...
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Re: Act 1 : Severing the Lines (2/2)
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the jinxed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - George watches Jen and Nicole argue. Later, Jen ...
Jul 23, 2025