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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Course and Destination

    You ARE extremely TALENTED! Sincerely, Ciara

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Inspired

    I absolutely adore it, Nicely done. I have no improvements to be made to it- at all! I'm sure there are some, but none that I could find. Sincerely, Ciara

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Life

    How about this? Sometimes life is hard, (I got rid of the always) can't seem to play the right card. (I added seem to) Love gets lost and is never ...

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Distant Chains

    I absolutely adore it, and I thought that it flowed nicely. Well done! Sincerely, Ciara

    Oct 23, 2011


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)