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This story opens at a great spot. I feel like it's immediately easy to get drawn into the world, mostly because you're writing is really good at expressing the protagonist's ...

Hi, I just have a few thoughts on this opening chapter. So, to start things off, I can say that I'm very intrigued by this story. It's too early to ...

Hi, I just have a few thoughts about this chapter. This is a very strong start to a story. Mina's character is instantly enthralling, starting at a moment of intense ...

Hi there! I'd also like to offer a quick review of this work, despite knowing nothing of the 'Wings of Fire' series. Most notably, I enjoy that the exposition is ...