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I like it! :P But I have to go back and read everything else hahah, its all confusing to me right now. I promise I will! xD Its really good ...

Sorry I just felt like pointing this out 'cause it was so darn funny! :) I didn’t have a subject for my psychology paper. Where did you get a subject ...

This is really good! I don't have any criticism at all xD This is the first chapter of 'Mr. Angel...' that I read but I can tell already that I'll ...

Wow, thats so good! WHY did you have to stop there? DID SHE DIE?! D: I like how its the utter truth about jockeys, how so much stress is put ...

"So are you done unpacking?" Asked the voice on the other side of the receiver. It was sunset in London and the sky was clear and cloudless as it change ...

That's really good! I love the life you put into the dialogue. I could really imagine hearing that conversation while passing a room with cleaning maids saying that. (: Good ...

I agree with RedFang on "I am just speechless on this piece of work." Hahah, It was amazing! I like the rhymes you put in too. :D well, we all ...

This is great! Hahah. I love but hate the cliff hanger at the end. :P I really like the characters- you described them in a way where you didn't need ...

Oooh thats really good! Hahah, and that humanoid figure is pretty creepy. I liked the way you described it. It let me imagine everything that was going on. ;) Well, ...

HAHAHHAH I absolutely love this! :D I love the humor you put it and you're writing style. Are you seriously English? If you are i think i may just love ...

sorry for commenting again but HOLY CRAP! That was so good ): It makes me wanna cry but not. It was so sad yet incredibly beautiful! I think I love ...

Oh geez! That was intense! :P hahahah it's really good!!! AHH second part, here I come! (:

Thats soooo good! I CANT wait to read more :D I think I might just die then come back to life when you write a new chapter xD Like I ...

That's really good! :D I can't wait to read more hahaha. You're an awesome writer. write more soon! :D -cookEmonster

Sorry, but yes. i'm the evil person whos going to critisize you're work THEN write compliments. :P The illuminating sun began to rise above the remaining trees, creating crowns of ...