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I was trying to figure out who your writing style reminded me of, and it hit me. Ellen Hopkins. I don't know if you read her stuff, but it has ...

You can take anything I say in whichever way you'd like. If you don't agree with something I've changed, don't feel like you have to change it. Summer was packing ...

Good evening. I think I'll start with nitpicks: I’ve always been a ‘the glass is half full ' sort of person (comma) but its hard to be optimistic when your ...

There really isn't anything to nitpick, this is written really well. Just this: the blood - thirsty hounds leapt from the dark forest that surrounded their home. The ir father’s ...

If I make any changes to the story, take them as suggestions. Punctuation errors should probably be changed though. The anaesthetic should have long worn off already (period) ” With ...

Hey, how's it going. I'm going to start with nitpicks: “Is someone else there?” s he croaked. “I’m here, (period instead) ” The gruff voice made her jump. “I didn't ...

Just by glancing at this, I can already tell that there will be many errors. The long, chunky writing doesn't appeal to anyone, and I would suggest breaking it into ...

I think your opinion is biased. You'll never have to make that choice, so you can say what you want about it, but you'll never really know. That's not to ...

I should really review earlier tomorrow, I'm sick of reviewing after SmylinG, I feel like I'm just repeating what she says, but in a worse way. Anyways: I had to ...

Sorry that it's taking so long to review these, been so busy with school and whatnot. But I have some time now, so let's do this (insert s word here, ...

“I don’t think so, Ross, (period) C an I call you Ross?” around here, a face like that you don’t forget in a hurry. Worded a bit awkwardly. “I know ...

Day two of reviewing this story, woop. I actually read about 4 more chapters this morning while I was doing my hair, but I didn't have time to write reviews, ...

I'm not gonna lie, I read your spoiler and I'm hoping that this isn't too Stephen King-like. I find his characters to be rather dry and boring. The c lock ...

I agree with you. The story of Flight 93, while a great tragedy, is an inspiring tale. It's always what tugs in the back of my mind when I think ...

I was working up on the 88th floor; only one or two floor s below where the plane crashed. The plane in the South Tower actually crashed below the 88th ...