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  • Short Story » General, General Re: First Kiss

    ohhh that made me laugh. I don't think I have any crit really, but I wanted to let you know how much I liked it.

    Jul 6, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: SAA: Sexually Abused Anonymous: A Memoir

    Ohhh that's awful. I'm sorry. I deeply respect you for feeling able to share this to be honest. It sounds almost callous to start talking about the quality of your ...

    Jul 4, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: All the Shades of Grey - Prologue

    To ChernobyllyInclined: Yes but, don't humans generally seem to be much more interested in the darker stuff than the positives? For example, the media: very rarely is there anything positive. ...

    Jul 4, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Ring Master

    Ooh, intriguing. I'd love to see more of this. It does need some brushing up of basic grammar points (new line for a new person's speech) and checking up of ...

    Jul 3, 2008


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