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what was your inspiration?

I enjoyed this, even if it was sad. I agree with Kate that you should make the chapters longer, but being that these are just opening statements maybe they're right ...

I loved this, and im REALLY curious. i see that you posted it in April are you going to continue it? Please do!

this interests me. I wish you had added more.. However it leaves one to think up their own conclusions. Was this just a quick thought that you had to get ...

wow, this wants to make me punch my hypocritical coward even more!! I could just be predjudiced because i can relate to this topic, but I think this piece was ...

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hmm.. :) I like the simplicity of this piece. It's sounds like play-by-play action but conveys more than that. I espicially like the first line.

Don't worry it's NOTHING like Twilight! If you are interested check out Part 2... And please, Let me know if I'm doing something right. Thanx.

I loved this. Devstating desire. Have you read Wuthering Heights? I think you might like it. I wasn't exactly clear on this so I'll ask You ... is her face ...

It's as though you threw real emotions into it. And you did it very well. :cry: Bravo

I can't say much more than what's all ready been said, except that I got into this story too. I just have to point out how similar Denial AND Daniel ...

His parents are insane. I saw them just like little orphan Annie's fake parents! gum, mustache, too much lipstick, everything. The Sneed guy sounds allright, though. What happens next? I ...

You compose magic.

this piece is beautiful. It kept suspense with elegance. I'd love to see more of your work.