cmarie159

This was AMAZING! True, there are some spelling and grammatical errors, but I got into this so much I forgot about them! Some things could be a little more clear, ...

This piece threw me off a bit, I was imagining that the invisible force was something a little more internal. Maybe it is? I don't know. I definitely agree with ...

Thanks for all who critiqued, or just bothered to read this. I realize this has no real "point", but I thought it was interesting. Okay, truth is I have to ...

thanks for all the critique! I really appreciate it. I'm sorry if my spelling is sometimes a little different, my Firefox spell check is in English, not English-American, so things ...

0.0 stares into a blank oblivion. totally reminiscent of a marshmallow war i wrote about last year. you are genius. marry me. [dear lord, your the third person i've asked ...

the narrator is not mentally disable. although she'd like to say she has never took ANY crazy test. =X ok now she's worried.

thanks for all the reviews! I didn't actually submit this to sci-fi, i submitted it to other, but somehow it got fudged up, haha. I realize that the font is ...

0.o This was way better than your last poem. Absolutely amazing. You would only get this if you have ever sat through a class with completely shallow people and you ...

My friend, you are amazing. No lie. I love you, I want you to marry me, too! =]

for the bump, not meaning to, but if you could, I would love some harsh critique, and maybe one positive thing about it? I'd really appreciate it! Thanks

Thanks for all the positive feedback! I'm not quite sure what you meant by me changing voices here, it would be great if you elaborate. and I will definitely try ...

hey this was really good! The story was great, and I want to read more! I wonder who Rossa is...? I know, cause I'm special. But everyone should use context ...

I think this poem is very completely awesome. Yeah, great grammar, right? I think it's easy to relate to, but uses nice vocabulary. It portrays emotion very well.

I liked this poem. It was creative and original. A little "emo" for my taste, but it expresses emotion in a way where the reader can feel what you're feeling, ...