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  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Kidnapped, Revised

    Riding my bike along a deserted dirt road one chilly, winter night, I saw something up ahead of me that appeared to be a person laying on the ground. I ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: His Butler, Phantom Image #2

    “Probably training Pluto…” he said aloud to himself, absentmindedly and took another sip of the dark liquid. An almost-smile crossed his face as he thought of how much his demon ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Freewrite

    "It was just so funny to see him get drunk," he laughed wholeheartedly, like a bee on steroids. His teeth were filled with maggots, and his eyes widened like a ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: So this is how it ends.

    Her eyes glowed a fierce red, her damp body leaning against a wall as she held her hand to her waist to stop the bleeding. Her breathing heavy and Legend ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: His Butler, Phantom Image #2

    “Um… Master Ciel?” Ciel looked up to see Finnie (the gardener), May-Rin (the lady’s maid) and Bardroy (the cook) standing nervously in the doorway. Finnie was standing in front, holding ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The 3 Levels of the Gifted

    Wow that is probably the word that first popped into my head when I read this! A young man, his voice like velvet. I shivered. Then, I saw the syringe, ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Would Fly, But I'm too Afraid Of Heights

    Hey Emmylou! I think you did a great poem! I really feel like i am there. I think it was very good! It makes me feel like testing my fears ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Sally

    Hey that was really good, i reckon you did really well on the last verse and it ends well, you are really good! The second last paragraph was also really ...

    May 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: I'm so Proud of You - Chapter Four

    That was awesome, I really liked the King character and the Charlie character, I think You should continue writing this story and post ti if you do I really want ...

    May 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: I'm so Proud of You - Chapter Four

    That was really good, you should continue writing!

    May 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Knight Riders

    Hey can you tell me if you like it?

    May 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Magician

    May 24, 2012


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