closetwriter

This is beautifully written. I love the fingers grasping at "everything and nothing." The only thing that bothered me the slightest bit was the "What" in "What are you against ...

I like this poem! The title is awesome. Your choice of length in the lines is interesting. I wonder if you mean to convey doubt about getting involved with this ...

So I am a big twilight fan myself, and I like the poem over all. Especially the descriptions of him watching over you as you sleep, and the walks in ...

I love this poem!! The imagery is amazing! I love the first stanza about the night sky and the star in your eye. I also love "As I look at ...