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Thank you so much! I was going to have everyone live and be happy, but it didn't feel right to me, so out came our friend the taxi driver. I'm ...

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Wow! I must admit, you had me worried for a little bit, comparing something that a lot of people find enjoyable with something that most people don't, but you pulled ...

Steam? Water Vapor?

Thanks! I'm working on adding more description about the man's death, maybe from things that Sarah overhears from other peoples' conversations. I will also fix the grammatical error you pointed ...

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Nice to read a poem on here that isn't dark, or foreboding, or that can be interpreted multiple ways. Not that I have a problem with poems like that, it's ...

Thanks for reviewing! Eugh. Now that I go back and read "such a shame" again, it does seem... blah. Don't feel unhelpful, even the smallest contributions are important! I smile ...

Haha, I don't usually do happy endings. I love unhappy endings, because it's such a shock for people who are accustomed to everybody getting their happily ever after. You're right ...

You do this, but without the any of the spaces: [ quote ] text here [ /quote ] And you get this!

Wow! What a compliment! I really don't know what to say, other than an enthusiastic THANK YOU!

No, I just think it's hilarious.

Thanks, Iggy! I was actually going for sort of a storybook feel. As for the mask, I really wanted to leave that open to interpretation. I felt like it wasn't ...

I literally had to stop reading this review in like, the first three sentences because I had to back away from my computer and do a happy-flappy arm dance thing. ...

Thank you so much! I wanted to keep it kind of vague and hidden-meaning-children's-storybook style. I have a good idea of what the illness could represent, but I think I'll ...

Okay, thanks for clarifying, there was one capital "I" that kind of threw me off. :)

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This poem has good content, but you could work on your capitalization. I can't tell if it's meant to be all lowercase or not. I like the introspective tone of ...