cityofdragons

Owl is totally right, and I also like the contrast. If you are still writing more of this, thats cool, but if its finished, that's just WAY too short. Keep ...

This is really interesting. It gets your mind going and I really enjoyed that. It seemed kind of awkward though, because of the beginning of the next line up on ...

I want this as my ringtone! :D cute very cute :)

Thanks for the review guys! I came up with it about an hour before I wrote it... So I thought I did pretty good. This could really help me :D

I thought this was a really interesting story. I really like your style of writing and I didn't see any grammar problems except for a few typos. Otherwise I was ...

This is a really cool idea for the prolouge. It draws me into the story. The grammar is perfect and the sentences flow really nicely. I think you'll go very ...

This is absolutely amazing! I love your work, but some of the stanzas didnt flow correctly. Good job and I especially liked the two last stanzas! Keep writing!

Thanks guys! I know you weren't trying to be mean or anything, I know I can use more flow in my stories and this is my main story i'm working ...

I'm so jealous. You have a GIFT!!! A true gift! This poem speaks of truth and the grammar is REALLY good! Good job!

I am just in love with this poem already. It's sort of awkward, but I like the awkwardness. Keep writing this is absolutely amazing!

In the first sentence i meant to put "I opened one eye" sorry!

Thanks guys! As you know I'm only 12, so it's teaching me more about writing. It's really helping. Thanks again!