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So it was B1 who inspired you on this poem Chynel? Interesting. I didn't know you wrote about B1. Hand on heart, i didn't laugh, seriously. Like i said before, ...

This was a good poem. I understand the emotions behind it completely. I'm sorry if this happened to you. It does hurt. You are a good writer and you seem ...

Wow. This poem is so you. Its so good because its so different-thats not a bad thing. By the way, i'm not laughing as i'm saying this-i'm genuinely impressed. You ...

Hi there, So from a technical standpoint, I am totally impressed with this poem. I've been translating the poetry of Sappho from Ancient Greek and your poem reminds me a ...

Greetings, I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, I shall now explain right away I didn't like this, and I admit I can be rather harsh, but please don't ...

This is the one you showed me before! I'm sorry i laughed, i think it's really beautiful and flowing, and you have a truly special style. Of course, it makes ...

Yeah, spaces after all of your commas (, ) and periods (. ). Was it betrayed trust? Or a broken heart? Or was it open for interpretation? Or was it ...

Winged angel of the night, Fly into my nightly visions. Change the course of the path I set, As I sway in and out of conciousness. Take the first full ...

Great poem love your style! happy writing Thank you so much! I'm not really into poetry that much and it's rare that I attempt to write one. :P

This is beautiful . The emotion behind it is stunning and the imagery it just so striking. I love the rhyme,It adds a eerie aura to the poem. I love ...