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Thanks for all your comments. I have forwarded all criticism to our drummer. Snoink, Menimor aka. Many More is our band name, and I didn't know what the last line ...

Okay, erm... I think these lyrics have true potential, but could you tell what Key it is in, and what instruments are used. You could really quite go far with ...

I love this song. The lyrics are kinda emo, but I like that sort of stuff. Can you tell me what kind of instruments are used in this song, and ...

The words are incredible. However, criticising a song is very difficult without hearing what the music sounds like.