chloe13

All i'm saying is, God I loved this haha. Don't change anything, no matter who it may offend. Stick to the message you intended the song to portray. Good work.

Yes actually, there was a story in Skeleton Crew by Stephen King that involved characters being stranded in a desert that influenced the writing of this story. Except I think ...

Wow, I loved it. I think you should leave this as it is. There is ingenuity in simplicity with this piece of work, and it says all you need to ...

HAHA brilliant! This is exactly my school . . . sometimes I feel like mowgli :D

Can't say anything anyone else hasn't about this, besides that I think it's excellent! I'm sure we can all relate to this is some shape or form. Keep it up ...

I thought this was really beautifully written, and for me it held a really strong meaning. Well done!

I agree, this MUST be continued!

HAHA! I laughed so hard at "chillin in Ron Weasley's car" This is so original and clever! For the love of god, keep writing:D

Good good! haha I was actually starting to feel really claustrophobic at the start! Really entertaining to read and you've left me wanting more! keep it up!

Ah! yes, this is a problem I've often had . . friend tells me constantly! I guess I just get a bit carried away and forgot to actually make sure ...

I really like this, you should write more stuff! But I agree, you need a tad bit of work of catching the reader's attention.

Amazing, the chapters aren't long at all, but they say so much! Actually I like shorter chapters better, easier to read and process. NICE ONE ;)

I love this, just saying. I'm kind of hoping her son is going to be some really posh pretty boy or something. Keep up the good work!

Phwaahh, I love how imaginative this is :)

Just want to say I really enjoy your writing style and that you have really great story lines. Keep up the good work. :)