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Wow, truly beautiful imagery! After reading this I was left wanting more, so I think that you could run with this a bit more, build up the story that you ...

Well, I will tell you now that this almost brought tears into my eyes. This is a more casual style of poetry than I am used to reading, just because ...

Hi! I love the concept of this piece, and the imagery and metaphors you utilize are intriguing. However, while reading I found a lot of grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. ...

I greatly enjoyed this piece. The way you write his stream of consciousness is consistent and realistic. Stylistically I have a few recommendations: yes, you stated that this man in ...