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peanut~ Thank You so much for the review! :D After looking at my graded paper and your review I noticed that my teacher didn't catch all my mistakes. :lol: When ...

It was good I liked it. Espacialy the rain will make rainbows keep writing. (Sorry its a bad review but I'm tired and using my brothers phone.) Anyways your lyrics ...

Thanks guys! I was kind of scared to post this cause it kind of crazy. Gale is a child and talks like that to, I didn't mean for Gale to ...

Okay I couldn't think of anyone else who could be out there so I just made some one up. Thanks for the review Bunnie! -Chinchilla

Therm- yeah I didn't really notice that till now. :lol: :oops: . . . Well anyways that feeling sucks, I guess, but hey. Oh and I like the phrase -"While ...

Cassie- Thanks for the review I see what you mean about it being to over done, and all. The reason the guy is like that is because, I need them ...

Hey this was hilarious, I don't even know what this show is about, but I still like this thread. I hope you keep writing. :)

Wow thinks for editing it and making it longer, I kept thinking of what would she say to Adelica. I like your decision better though, mine all came out corny. ...

Thanks for the review, I feel kind of silly taking this long to type something so short. :oops: But hey. Thanks for the tips Moo! I hope I will be ...

Okay here's my real review sorry about the short one yesterday. Okay ti start this off I liked how she thought about him leaving her. How could he be so ...

Me again!! I like how you add this other part that way it doesn't seem like just like some teenager wishing that she could be in Darren Shawn's world. You ...

Thank you for the review I understand what you mean about the beat. I think that's the last song I'll write, because I just for some reason just can't really ...

Sorry for not responding sooner, but I had to go visit my grandma out in the middle of nowhere. Anyway I see what all of you mean, and thank you ...