One word,
I say,
Dont wanna talk bout it,
but when i bite my tongue it feels the same...
Its me and you, you and me
its hard to think bout it's such a rush
writtin on a piece of paper...
"us"
{Chorus]
Us is a rollercoaster,
a dark cloud on a sunny day,
sevral tears and a smile that makes it all okay,
A childhood fairytale cut in two,
Us equals me and you
late night,
on the phone,
You talke about how your all alone
But babi there's something i gotta tell ya
Its you and me, me and you
hard to put into words its such a rush
writttin in plain ink
"Us"
{Chorus]
Us is the warm rain and the rainbow it'll make,
hard work built up then thrown away,
beautiful music on a guitar without strings
us is just you and me
YOU! and how you swear you'll never fall in love
YOU! and how you make my head come undown
It wuz you who said i was the only one
ya it wuz you who i wanted to call us
Us is the wind blowin everysingle way
so many times i've cried
But when you hold me i'm okay!
Skydiving, candle dinners, heart ache, sparks and glitter,
Some damn feeling i just cant wash away!
Us isa rollercoaster...
A reminder i'll be okay
and everytime i see your eyes i forget what to say
But your with her,
Im with him
"Us" is just something i cant win
But to tell you the truth
"Us" just means that
I love you
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I liked this. It really sounded like a song to me. Like, I put a tune to it in my head. And made it like I was singing along to it. I liked the chorus and the lines used. Overall, I enjoyed it. great writing skills. It's hard, at least I think so, to write a song, rather than poetry. It might get hard to determine whether one day you're writing, whether it's poetry or a song. Maybe that's just me =P
It was good I liked it. Espacialy the rain will make rainbows keep writing. (Sorry its a bad review but I'm tired and using my brothers phone.) Anyways your lyrics are reaaly good and I really liked this.