child_of_death

The poem confused me a lot to where i did not know if you were talking about love or the nighttime. The poem seems to be forced and that makes ...

I understood your poem little too well for my own good. People say it will never happen to them, that they know how to say no and it ends like ...

This peice is very good and seems to hold more then most do. If I may, I would suggest that you CAP. more in it. Try using more periods in ...

True about the things people do today...but we are not hippies. but your poem is really good. 1st if i was you i would change the why statments around and ...

its really good i give you that but, it seems as if you start alot of the verses with she. think of word that could correspond with it. maybe show ...