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  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies

    Why does my stupid computer always post everything I type twice? Grrrrrrr..........

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Lyrical Re: His Sweet Embrace

    Thank you so much for the review! I am very grateful for your advice, and I have a feeling that I will be coming back to this review when I ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Lyrical Re: His Sweet Embrace

    Dear Meandbooks, thank you for the review. I am sorry if you do not like this story, but I have tried to improve it. Is this any better? I know ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: Fuzz

    Sorry sir, I am somewhat new to this, and dead tired, so please forgive me if I accidentally post the review over and over, make stupid errors, or give a ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Lyrical Re: His Sweet Embrace

    Hi, me again, I'm not sure I am so fond of this one. It is rather late for me right now and I was up to eleven pm last night, ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: Fuzz

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    I like your poem here, and I think you are using a topic that most people don't think much about. However you do have an error. You seem to be ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I Don't Want to be Better

    I'm just saying here, I do not always agree with what I write at times, too. I write from experiances in my own life, to some extent, but I do ...

    Sep 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I Don't Want to be Better

    I'm glad that my poems and stories are able to strike home with those who read my works, it makes me feel both happy and sad that I can play ...

    Sep 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I Don't Want to be Better

    Thank you so much for the review! I am glad for the nitpicking because it helps me make my poems even better! ^\/^ best of luck!

    Sep 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I Don't Want to be Better

    Thank you for the review!

    Sep 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I Don't Want to be Better

    Greetings, this is slightly less professional than what I usually do, but this kinda came to me out of no where, and I had no paper so I wrote it ...

    Sep 9, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rippling waters, singing skies

    Thank you sooo much!! I am glad you are fond of my writing and thank you for pointing out my errors. Run on sentences seem to be a common complaint ...

    Sep 9, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rippling waters, singing skies

    Thank you very much for the tips, and the compliments! I think I might be able to expand this but only if I get a few more requests to do ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature Re: Light and darkness

    You use an interesting idea my friend, one that has been debated for centuries. Good job, but I think listening to your criticism and editing appropriately would be a good ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rippling waters, singing skies

    Greetings ladies and gentlemen, this is my second story, so please, feel free to criticize at will. Please forgive me for the sudden italics and bolding half way through, I ...

    Sep 6, 2015


worlds buzz over us like bees, / we be splendid in new bones.
— Lucille Clifton