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Re: BROKEN LOOK
Hi! Like creativityrules, I didn't read the spoiler until was through reading the poem, which was dark but lovely. I really do wish the best for you. The only thing ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: A Flower Amongst Thorns
Agreeing with Socks here! "Knowledge is power, power is fear." I LOVE that line!! Darker writing is always more moving, at least in what I have read. All the little ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Puppets
I thought that the comparison between a man and a puppet was very original and neat! I loved the wording used to describe the smaller details! The only two mistakes ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Black Feathers
I thought that this is a lovely poem, reflecting the view from one watching the crow. I did not see anything to change other than a few commas where the ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Alone Poem
Hi! I thought that this poem had an enormous amount of meaning to it! I loved the picture it painted in my mind. There would be only one thing I ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Better To Have Loved and Lost
Hi there! This is one of my favorite poems now!! I know many people have this same opinion but they do not know how to put it into words, (I've ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: In The Ashes
I just wanted to say, I absolutely loved this!!! It has a depth/meaning that even those who don't share a religion will understand, but those who do may appreciate this ...
Nov 14, 2011
