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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: BROKEN LOOK

    Hi! Like creativityrules, I didn't read the spoiler until was through reading the poem, which was dark but lovely. I really do wish the best for you. The only thing ...

    Nov 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Flower Amongst Thorns

    Agreeing with Socks here! "Knowledge is power, power is fear." I LOVE that line!! Darker writing is always more moving, at least in what I have read. All the little ...

    Nov 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Puppets

    I thought that the comparison between a man and a puppet was very original and neat! I loved the wording used to describe the smaller details! The only two mistakes ...

    Nov 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Black Feathers

    I thought that this is a lovely poem, reflecting the view from one watching the crow. I did not see anything to change other than a few commas where the ...

    Nov 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Alone Poem

    Hi! I thought that this poem had an enormous amount of meaning to it! I loved the picture it painted in my mind. There would be only one thing I ...

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Better To Have Loved and Lost

    Hi there! This is one of my favorite poems now!! I know many people have this same opinion but they do not know how to put it into words, (I've ...

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: In The Ashes

    I just wanted to say, I absolutely loved this!!! It has a depth/meaning that even those who don't share a religion will understand, but those who do may appreciate this ...

    Nov 14, 2011


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling